Thecharacterizationofthemalecharacterisnotverydetaillypresented.PerhapsthisisChapter2ofthestory,allthenecessarydescriptionsofthemalecharacterhavealreadygiveninChapter1,sowedonotknowwhatexactlyhelookslike.Ifthewriterhasgivenalltheseinthefirstchapterwithanintroductionofthebackgroundofthischaracter,thenwewillacceptsuchabriefpresentation.Butifthewriterhasnotdoneso,thenweconsideritisnecessaryforhimtoputmoredetaileddescriptionsofthecharcter,forexample,howdoesheexactlylooklike,howtallheis,whyheissoattractivetogirls,hisfacefeatures,hisstrengthandweaknessetc.
HemaymissthechancetointroducetothereadersadescriptionoftheOperaHouseinSydney.WepresumethewritermayhavegonetoAustraliaandhavevisitedtheOperaHouse.ButwereadersmayhavetheintereststoknowwhattheworldknownOperaHousereallylooklike.Itisabitdisappointedthatthewriterfailstodoso.
Asamatteroffact,suchinadequatedescriptionsofplace,charactersandfeelings,seemtobetheweaknessofthewriterinwritingthisnovel.
Wearenotgivenaclearpictureofwhatthehotelreallylooklike.Isitgrandorjustamotel?IsitsituatedattheheartofSydneyorattheoutskirtofthecity.Nothingdetailshavebeengiven.
Itisuntilthedescriptionsofthesexgamestakenplaceatthehotel\'sroomthatbuildsuptheatmosphereandclimaxofthischapter.
Duetothedifficultyinbooking,thethreecharactersareforcedtostayinoneroom.Suchanarrangementgivesthewritertopresentaromanticyethornytasteofthestory.Threepersonsinonesingleroom?Whatwillhappentothem?Howwillthemalecharacterhandlethesetwogirls?Whatwillthetwogirlsd
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