enIsaythereisnothingspecial,Imeanthepresentationofthelovemakingbetweenthemisabittooshallow.Therearedescriptionsofsomereferencesoflovemaking.Butthedetailedprocessesoflovemakinghavebeenmissedout.Theusualfemale\'ssexreponsesinsuchaabnormalsexacthasnotbeenclearlypresented.Whataretheresponseofthemaleandthefemaleinlovingmakingisalsoslightlytouched.Thisistosomeextentnotsatisfactorytosomereaders.Thesereaders,especiallythosewhohavegotaccumstomedtosuchnatureofwritings,willlookforsomethingwithsomeunexpectedsexexcitementsveryexplicitdescriptions.Butnotinthisnovel.Theycanonlyfindsomestraightforwarddescriptionswhichfailtogointotheverybottomoftheheartsofthereaderswhocannotidentifiedwiththecharactersinthisstory.
Thisisperhapssomethingtodowiththecontroloflanguageofthewriter.Weneedsomemorematurevocabulariestogiveagoodpresentationofthecharactersfeatures,wellcomposedsentencestructuresandappropriatechoiceofdictionstoexposetherealsexmakinginthisstory.
Thisnovel,however,hasawonderfultopic:”TheLis\'Families-IncestsandAdulteries”.Thistopicimmediatelyhasattractedtheattentionofthereadersespeciallythosewhoareespeciallyinterestedinreadingsuchtypesofnovels.
Whetherthecontentsareinterestingornot.Itatleasthasattractedthereaders\'interesttohavealookatthestory.
Forthosewhoarenotparticularylypickyaboutstyleofwriting,thisnovelisbasicallyagoodnovelwhichworthsenjoyiingwithpleasure.
＊＊＊＊＊＊這樣的轉折還真不賴啊原來有其他內情啊看樣子佈局也越來越廣了啊＊＊＊＊＊＊看起来这样的情节发展下去，另一个表弟媳妇玉秀也很快登场喽！＊＊＊＊＊＊好好发展，越乱越好！～这就是乱伦的真谛，感谢作者！！！＊＊＊＊＊＊捉一小虫
“双手抓住门边，楞住了”改为“双手抓住门边，愣住了”＊＊＊＊＊＊也捉几个虫。期待下面的兄弟换妻淫乱。(责任编辑：admin)
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