置居然那么(重)！——重要
也许我很快就要改口称你(作)岳母了——做
自己的脑子难道是(秀逗)了？好似完全不知道一些话的轻重——锈透＊＊＊＊＊＊文章演变成男主角女人见一个扒一个，有点女人全光光了，还是前半部更好看。＊＊＊＊＊＊“感受满地月光”与文学作者区的“雨季乱雨纷纷”是最成功的作品，只可惜“雨季”很久不更新了，盼望“月光”一直创作下去。＊＊＊＊＊＊Onceagain,Ifeelabitsorryforthenovelistforbeingcritiziedforhavingmademistakesinhischoiceofdictionsandsentencestructureoruseofwrongwords.
Basically,IunderstandourSIShasprovidedaservicetothereaderstocommentthemistakesoftheoriginalnovel.ButpersonallyIthinkitistheobligationsofallthereaderstoshowtheirsinceresupportandencouragementstothewriterornovelistFIRSTbeforetheyblundtlydisplaythemistakestheyhavedugout.Appreciationofothers\'effortsandcontributionsareourbasicpoliteness.
Thisnovelitselfhasembodiedaveryhightechniqueofliteralywriting,especiallyinhiscarefullselectionofwordstodepicttheinwardmixedandsuspendingfeelingsofthemainmalecharacterwhenheispreparingtoseducehisaunt.Itisgenerallydifficultforanovelisttogiveasuccessfuldescribingofthepsychologicalsymptomsofthecharacterswhenorbeforehe/shehaspreparedtocommitasinfulaction,especiallythoseinvolvedwithincestandadulteriesbecausethesearefundamentarilyagainstthesocialnorm.Wemayhavereadhundredsofsuchsimilarstoriesaboutincestandadultery.Mostofthemsimplydescribedhowthemalehasseducedthefemaleandthenfollowedcountlesslovemaking.Thesexactionsarekeptonandonagainuntilyoufeeltiredofthem.Interestingly,themalehasalwaysbeendescribedasasupermanwhocankeeponmakinglovewithoutstopping.(HavingtakenViagra,Isuppose)(责任编辑：admin)
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